Chapter 5 Page 2
“look stop asking how I got up here people do crazy things when they’re in love”
One of the big things I hope you’ll see in Chapter 5 onwards is a bit more character to Leo. One of the few complaints I’ve gotten while working on this comic is that Leo comes off as a little bland, with not much to him besides being dumbstruck over Hana and insecure over his baking. It’s something I acknowledge and agree with.
Starting in Chapter 5 however, I hope to change that. he’s passed the “dumbstruck love” phase, and should be a more motivated character going forward. He’s got a growing crush on Hana and thanks to Lisbeth’s screwup, knows that she’s the only one who likes his baking. Beyond that, I also intend to really show how sheltered and socially inept he is. Lisbeth has been his only friend growing up, and while he might not have feelings for her the way she’d like him to, she’s also his only real friend outside of his family. So when other guys in the class start to befriend him (and try to get him in on a nefarious scheme…) He finds himself more than a little out of his depth…
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